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Chapter 1 pg.5

July 19th, 2012, 1:15 pm

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Reply Omnimon630A, July 19th, 2012, 1:15 pm

Do you see Metal Sonic's change of sprites. There better then the old one. Atleast I think.
Alright, the other authors can start updating! Just make sure in the imideiate comic page after this, you make Omni and the gang go to different areas to find Retro, then whoever updates character will find Retro and try and fight him cause then Retro is already undercontrol, thank you.

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Reply PeejsterM, July 19th, 2012, 5:18 pm

You should spellcheck and proofread your text. There are quite a few errors I found.

In addition, look at the first page I made on How Do I Comic. Neon Green does not look good on a white background. Also, be sure to give your speech bubbles a border.

At the very least, the way you arranged the speech bubbles is good, except for the fifth panel. The text "Whatever" would have worked better if it were below Metal Sonic, and if Metal Sonic's speech was above Metal Knuckles.

Also, with the final panel. It doesn't look like Metal Knuckles is actually gliding. And the green recolor still looks like he's lying flat. His arms and legs should be hanging like a ragdoll's.

Reply Omnimon630A, July 19th, 2012, 5:35 pm

@PeejsterM: Thank you for the C+C, though, he's not a recoulor

Reply BlueyKid, July 20th, 2012, 12:13 pm

@Omnimon630A: A green Sonic isn't enough to be called recolor?

Reply Omnimon630A, July 20th, 2012, 2:23 pm

@BlueyKid: He's a minor edit.

Reply Super Bluey, August 3rd, 2012, 8:15 pm

@Omnimon630A: But I don't know why PeejsterM refers these Sonic Advance edits as recolors...

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